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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Ahem. I shall separate into the 4 categories here:
Vision: 4/5
I love her playful pose and how she's about to land on the flower. Her smile is so precious. The legs are proportioned correctly. However, her upper body (not very noticeable at first glance) seems a littttttllle awkward. I think it is because of her hidden arm. From viewing the pose, using myself as reference..Her arm shouldn't really be seen as much..If that makes any sense? However, the hand should still be seen.
Originality: 5/5
It's very rare that I'm a fan of simple background. This is very suiting for her character. I also love how her foot has a darker shadow. It gives depth to it.
Technique: 5/5
You have a great painting technique. Smooth on some parts..like her hair and someone sloppyish..on her skirt..But hey, being a little sloppy is ok when it comes to painting! :3 So you have knowledge on painting.
Impact: 4.5/5
Seeing this makes me feel like a magazine shot or some sort of advertisement. Reason why it didn't get 5 full stars is that it's not superly detailed.
OVERALL...
DUNDUNDUN
Keep up the good work. :3 I do have suggestions since I don't really see much problems with this painting...
Focus more on detailed backgrounds! Even if you have to use photo reference. Like how you did with your Merry Christmas painting. You seem pretty pro as an artist.
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